Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.31 by 3d6wilddogs on May 22, 2023 at 4:00 am Chapter: Ch.3 - FollowCharacters: Baron, Dr Irving Stone, Vigi Elliwiny: Good job, Vigi, you’re gonna need all your luck for this one.
very minor comment: I have never been in a hotel with halls that wide on the room floors. Perhaps I have just not gone to the good conventions?
It does make for a good visual in the story, though :}
They are a bit wide. This was still pretty early when Elli’s relationship with backgrounds, and the putting of characters therein, was still very fresh. I let a lot of little stuff like that slide though; you have to pick your battles.