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Elliwiny: Even if Sara wasn’t secretly a professional killer and Ben wasn’t secretly dead, this is a lil’ bit of a red flag, eh?

Sincerely: Like I said at the beginning of the scene, this kind of scene is really nervy. Arguments are hands down the hardest to write and this is kind of a one-sided argument. Sara using classic abusive manipulation tactics to overwhelm Marco and it was really hard to write! You’re towing a line, you’re counting on your creative partner to sell it artistically, you’re having to figure out how to color the background with that weird half-head she drew into the middle of the panel. What’s up with that?

Anyway, basically, what I’m saying is, I think this whole sequence turned out really effective. It could’ve turned out really badly or, worse, boring.