Opps1 – Ch.10 – Pg.4
Elliwiny: To sound effect, or not to sound effect…. To this day I don’t know if I made the right calls. Most of this scene is technically ‘silent’. It felt wrong to put a big BOOM! On this page in particular. Jack’s gun doesn’t make a noise until we cut to Sara’s party… But I don’t remember if that was deliberate. Maybe for a future edit I’ll commit to the bit and take out that ‘whump’ the bodyguard makes when he’s shot on page 2.
Had not noticed before that the roof over the front driveway was clear. How picky is manglement about cleaning it? I have enough trouble trying to get the bathroom mirror without streaks. Is the roof strong enough for a floor polisher? How crazed does that crew get when a flock of birds are overhead :}
I hadn’t thought about that before, hahaha!!! God, it’s a money pit for SURE cleaning that. I bet it’s covered in anti-bird spikes, too