Elliwiny: Kyan’s annoyance at Vigi’s lack of intel… Typical Vigi nonsense!! Sincerely: Oh good, the bosses are here.
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Ch.6 - Duty Free
25 comics.
Elliwiny: Ah yes, you saw her assets. Sincerely: I like it in stories when the characters share info that they’ve independently collected. I like writing that stuff.
Elliwiny: Failed the door frame inspection. Shame. SHAME!
Elliwiny: There’s a lot of foreshadowing/expositing in this sequence – Not just with these “hippy” characters but with weaknesses that Jack is going to exploit at the beginning of book 2.
Elliwiny: This is just the job, Kyan. C’est La Vie
Sincerely: Tabitha (the kid) is way too old to be carried. We just thought it would be funny. Haha, Kyan doesn’t know how kids work. Or maybe she’s just like “children are squirrely, I’m gonna carry this one so it[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Hey why don’t they make rainbow light up shoes for adults, huh??
Sincerely: Ah, yes, the hippies. They’re not really hippies, but that’s what Elli and I call them for short hand. They were going to be a bigger deal in book 2 but we obviously never got that far.
Sincerely: The first version of this page was, uh, not good. I made Elli redo it entirely after we finished the book and now it looks amazing. Elliwiny: I don’t think I even have the old version anymore, that’s how[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: This chapter is a bit of an odd duck. I like that we get to zero in on how Kyan’s detective work is different from Vigi’s. She’s antisocial but she’s a people-watcher, too. Vigi is very active in her[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…