Elliwiny: Good job, Vigi, you’re gonna need all your luck for this one.
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Ch.3 - Follow
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Elliwiny: This panel thing was Sin’s idea, too. Poor Vigi. She’s so, so out of her depth. Sincerely: Sometimes you just gotta do a thing with the panels and it’s awesome.
Elliwiny: It was sin’s idea to have him checking his stocks during this conversation, as if it wasn’t enough for him to be piecing together Vigi’s profile and the shenanigans she’s been up to at the same time
Elliwiny: I can’t believe sin’s got nothing to say for this scene. It was SO hard to write. Everything with Stone is harder because he’s supposed to be a mastermind and Sin just knocks every one of his scenes out[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.27
Sincerely: Villains aren’t allowed to have apple products. Please don’t tell apple that we gave several of our villains apple phones.
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.26
on May 10, 2023
at 4:00 am
Chapter: Ch.3 - Follow
Characters: Dr Irving Stone, Elet Lorn, Kyan, Lobsters, Nathan, Sara, Tath Seti, The Fitzwilliams, The Oros
Elliwiny: There’s a lot of outlines of people in these meeting scenes, and I vaguely remember that it’s because I got overwhelmed by the scope and Sin suggested I go about it that way. Looking back, there really isn’t anything[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.25
Elliwiny: I don’t know what to call this panel layout, where there are things going on at the same time in different places and the panels are staggered to visually separate them, but it’s become one of my favorite layouts.
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.24
Elliwiny: I said before that the smart thing to do would be to shoot a text to your co-conspirators warning them about the calls, but then again…
Elliwiny: Sin and I call this 11-12 panel setup ‘the watchmen’ and sometimes it’s just the thing. Sincerely: It usually goes something like, we’re looking at the beats and we’re realizing it’s gonna be a bunch of panels and then[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sincerely: Jack knows immediately what happened. The smart thing to do would be to let it go to voicemail and shoot off a text to your co-conspirators. But dang it, antagonizing the wannabe detective is just more fun