Elliwiny: Vigi…….. hanging out in the planters makes you MORE suspicious……
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Ch.3 - Follow
32 comics.
Elliwiny: Are you telling me you *don’t* go into commercial kitchens and mess up the mis en place to briefly feel like you’re in control of your life? Sincerely: If Jack doing unnecessarily petty things like littering and dropping the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.9
on March 31, 2023
at 4:00 am
Chapter: Ch.3 - Follow
Characters: Collin Parish, Dr Irving Stone, Jack Frost, Kyan, Lobsters, Nathan, Sara, The Fitzwilliams, The Oros
Elliwiny: I learned SO much about commercial kitchen spaces while doing these two pages. Sin worked at a restaurant at the time and had all the good notes. Sincerely: Kitchens! How convenient that with the bankers and the aliens using[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.8
Elliwiny: I really love Dr. Stone’s understated entrance into the story as just another one of these banker types.
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.7
Elliwiny: Any opportunity I have to fill up a panel with the Oros, I take it!! And he’s a spook, Seti, you can just say he’s a spook. I feel like Elet Lorn was going to be a big bad[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.6
Elliwiny: Hahahahaha Fitzwilliam talking about the flu or somesuch like it’s a novel inconvenience sure does hit different here in 2023
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.5
Elliwiny: Watch out, he’s got a microphone! Fun fact, this reporter is the same one we see at the beginning/end of the story. Sincerely: “But there are plenty of Humans in space already” is kind of a red herring, I[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Back when I drew it, I don’t think I appreciated or understood all the little tricks I used to support Sin’s writing for this exposition. Like how Seti slows down his speech with an air of condescension, and how[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I forgot about Seti’s little fingercap jewelry! That’s fun, past me. Sincerely: This exposition was much better than the chapter 1 exposition. I broke it up a lot more effectively and also it’s in chapter 3 so we’ve had[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I kinda wish I’d drawn Tath Seti on the interior of the bus, even though past me would have haaated it and it doesn’t really add anything to this transition. I just think the visual of Tath Seti’s posse[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…