Sincerely: And that’s it. That’s the end of the book. It’s not the end of the story tho, because this entire book was originally supposed to be one chapter at the beginning of the next book to establish what “normal”[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Houston, we have a problem
Sincerely: This is secretly foreshadowing for something that’s gonna come up in chapter 1 of book 2 but I sold it as them just getting back into their regular status quo. It’s just a never ending cycle with them.
Sincerely: Two tall panels side by side. Jack walking off into the darkness. As transition panels go these are topnotch.
Sincerely: Elli got this series of panels in exchange for losing the ambulance window argument and honestly it’s some of her best expression-work in the whole book. I love this page. Elliwiny: This is one of my all-time favorite pages,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sincerely: Call back to page 3 of the prologue. You can go hit that first button and really see how astronomically Elli improved as an artist in four years. Elliwiny: You can even see Marco in those first pages if[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Good for you, Vigi, with your capacity for self reflection and change. She’s gonna go places.
Elliwiny: Could you imagine Kyan and Baron working together? What a nightmare. For both of them. Mostly for Kyan.
Sincerely: We talked a lot about how this is the moment in a normal movie where they kiss and how it was so important that they didn’t actually kiss, weren’t able to kiss, and remembered that they shouldn’t kiss. Elliwiny:[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sincerely: Elli and I argued for literal days about that little window between the cab and the back of the ambulance. I still distinctly remember showing up at a friend’s house for dinner absolutely yelling at each other about it.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…