Sincerely: More gorgeous transition panels. Yeah, Kyan. You outro this chapter/day. I love you babe. We’ll see all four of these locations again 🙂 Elliwiny: Hey that’s where ‘it’s april, shithead’ happens! Happy April, everybody. Actually I think this page[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Ch.5 - Whiskey
Book 1 – Ch.5 – Pg.28
Elliwiny: Look on the bright side, Kyan, standing dramatically under a spotlight in the dark while you stake out the enemy is it’s own reward. You look very cool.
Elliwiny: Listen man, maybe Sara fucks with you because you make it so *easy*. Also lmao at Stone checking out to look at his phone. Jack really is so easy to play
Book 1 – Ch.5 – Pg.26
Book 1 – Ch.5 – Pg.25
Sincerely: Atticus watches a lot of romcoms. He’s a romantic. Elliwiny: Is lovingly rendering a femme fatale perched on the corpses of the men she’s conquered typical closeted lesbian behavior? No? Just me?
Sincerely: As Elli’s mentioned before, writing Stone was a real challenge. He’s gotta sound smart and he’s gotta be manipulative without reading as manipulative. The contrast between his levelheadedness and Jack’s hyper-emotionalness (or Vigi in ch.3) really does half the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: What is that, protein powder and TV Dinners? The hell kind of diet are you on, Stone? Okay this ice pack is clearly based on one I’ve got in my own freezer, but it would have been fun to[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sincerely: There must not be video evidence that Jack and Stone know each other. I mean if we’re being completely mercenary with this commentary I should tell you that obviously this sequence is explicitly to highlight the fact that there’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.5 – Pg.20
Sincerely: Atticus says this was Stone’s idea, but how could Stone have known unless you snitched in the first place. Checkmate, Moleman. Jack still doesn’t deserve him, tho. Elliwiny: It’s weird to think about how serious the repercussions are for[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…