Opps1 – Ch.8 – Pg.4
Elliwiny: Hello narratively important objects, my beloved. Sincerely: This is where it starts. That last panel. That’s the beginning of The Bit.
Elliwiny: Hello narratively important objects, my beloved. Sincerely: This is where it starts. That last panel. That’s the beginning of The Bit.
Elliwiny: Panel 2 is peak Jack, tbh Sincerely: Even when she’s coming to him humbled, Sara can’t help taking the shots. I love that about her.
Elliwiny: I love drawing clutter. It’s like a little puzzle. Sincerely: Easily one of my favorite pages from the whole book. Clutter is one of those deceptively hard things to draw well. Elli never disappoints when I ask for clutter.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Look on the bright side, Kyan, standing dramatically under a spotlight in the dark while you stake out the enemy is it’s own reward. You look very cool.
Elliwiny: Listen man, maybe Sara fucks with you because you make it so *easy*. Also lmao at Stone checking out to look at his phone. Jack really is so easy to play
Sincerely: Atticus watches a lot of romcoms. He’s a romantic. Elliwiny: Is lovingly rendering a femme fatale perched on the corpses of the men she’s conquered typical closeted lesbian behavior? No? Just me?
Sincerely: As Elli’s mentioned before, writing Stone was a real challenge. He’s gotta sound smart and he’s gotta be manipulative without reading as manipulative. The contrast between his levelheadedness and Jack’s hyper-emotionalness (or Vigi in ch.3) really does half the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: What is that, protein powder and TV Dinners? The hell kind of diet are you on, Stone? Okay this ice pack is clearly based on one I’ve got in my own freezer, but it would have been fun to[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…