Sincerely: There must not be video evidence that Jack and Stone know each other. I mean if we’re being completely mercenary with this commentary I should tell you that obviously this sequence is explicitly to highlight the fact that there’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
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Book 1 – Ch.5 – Pg.20
Sincerely: Atticus says this was Stone’s idea, but how could Stone have known unless you snitched in the first place. Checkmate, Moleman. Jack still doesn’t deserve him, tho. Elliwiny: It’s weird to think about how serious the repercussions are for[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: This panel thing was Sin’s idea, too. Poor Vigi. She’s so, so out of her depth. Sincerely: Sometimes you just gotta do a thing with the panels and it’s awesome.
Elliwiny: It was sin’s idea to have him checking his stocks during this conversation, as if it wasn’t enough for him to be piecing together Vigi’s profile and the shenanigans she’s been up to at the same time
Elliwiny: I can’t believe sin’s got nothing to say for this scene. It was SO hard to write. Everything with Stone is harder because he’s supposed to be a mastermind and Sin just knocks every one of his scenes out[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.27
Sincerely: Villains aren’t allowed to have apple products. Please don’t tell apple that we gave several of our villains apple phones.
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.26
Elliwiny: There’s a lot of outlines of people in these meeting scenes, and I vaguely remember that it’s because I got overwhelmed by the scope and Sin suggested I go about it that way. Looking back, there really isn’t anything[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.25
Elliwiny: I don’t know what to call this panel layout, where there are things going on at the same time in different places and the panels are staggered to visually separate them, but it’s become one of my favorite layouts.
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.9
Elliwiny: I learned SO much about commercial kitchen spaces while doing these two pages. Sin worked at a restaurant at the time and had all the good notes. Sincerely: Kitchens! How convenient that with the bankers and the aliens using[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…