Opps1 – Ch.8 – pg.10
Sincerely: Using the scenery to indicate that he can’t quite hear the dialogue? Yes, please. Elliwiny: Jack can’t hear for shit! That’s the briefcase that is managing to listen in.
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Opps1 – Ch.8 – Pg.8-9
Elliwiny: Christmas dotted lines for the Christmas boy! I like this as the reveal that the place is swarming with cops, too. Also I just noticed that wacky pink alien in the middle! Whaaaat is his deal?? I have no[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: And once again, it’s Marco making first contact! I don’t know, it’s funny that I never really thought that deeply about this quality Marco has, where he can dive right into new social interactions. It’s no wonder Sara likes[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Pish posh, security!!! I enjoy these little windows into Kyan’s work life. She cares so deeply about doing quality work when there are thousands of reasons to not give a shit. Sincerely: I love it when they do the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Harth and Ozalle Oro are difficult but rewarding to frame into scenes. I really love filling up whole panels with their big ol’ boomer faces.
Elliwiny: Kyan’s annoyance at Vigi’s lack of intel… Typical Vigi nonsense!! Sincerely: Oh good, the bosses are here.
Elliwiny: Ah yes, you saw her assets. Sincerely: I like it in stories when the characters share info that they’ve independently collected. I like writing that stuff.
Elliwiny: Failed the door frame inspection. Shame. SHAME!
Elliwiny: There’s a lot of foreshadowing/expositing in this sequence – Not just with these “hippy” characters but with weaknesses that Jack is going to exploit at the beginning of book 2.
Elliwiny: This is just the job, Kyan. C’est La Vie