Elliwiny: Artfully arranging all of those bodies was a nightmare but, so worth it. So long, junior bankers. Sincerely: We lost a lot of really amazing, insightful comments when I accidentally nuked the website, but there was one pair of[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
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Opps1 – Ch.10 – Pg.8
Opps1 – Ch.10 – Pg.6
Sincerely: I’m not a foot guy in the sense that there’s nothing sexual about feet for me, but a well drawn shoes? Damn. Also, wow, that new guy is back. He’s kind of hot isn’t he? Like there’s a real[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Opps1 – Ch.10 – Pg.4
Elliwiny: To sound effect, or not to sound effect…. To this day I don’t know if I made the right calls. Most of this scene is technically ‘silent’. It felt wrong to put a big BOOM! On this page in[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Sara’s kill count blows everyone else’s out of the water, goddamn. Where’s that gif of Lucille Bluth going ‘good for her’? Sincerely: So ends the special occasion lovely merlot.
Sincerely: Sara’s speech was an absolute joy to write. I was intimidated by it for a long time, but when I finally sat down to write it, it came out so effortlessly.
Sincerely: I adore the WUMP WUMP WUMPs. Kyan, not so much. Elliwiny: “Darren, what is it you do?” is such a subtle and effective set up that I almost didn’t want to say anything about it. But this is what[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Opps1 – Ch.9 – Pg.14
Elliwiny: Poor Vigi… Sincerely: Having four or five scenes going down simultaneously and being able to use color and landmarks to keep them all differentiated is such a power trip for me. I’m so proud of this whole chapter, it[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…