Elliwiny: There’s a lot of foreshadowing/expositing in this sequence – Not just with these “hippy” characters but with weaknesses that Jack is going to exploit at the beginning of book 2.
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Sincerely: I dunno why I went so hard with the lighting in the last panel but I like it. Elliwiny: You probably did that because otherwise it’d be a void, lol
Sincerely: Oh good, I was worried that the bongs being used to prop up the console screen didn’t make it onto the page. Bugbears can’t get stoned, so I’m not sure why they have them, but they do and they[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sincerely: Designing the bugbears’ living space was quite a challenge, lemme tell you what. We knew that there were going to be a lot of scenes in there in the next book (like the entirety of ch.2) so we had[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.26
on May 10, 2023
at 4:00 am
Chapter: Ch.3 - Follow
Characters: Dr Irving Stone, Elet Lorn, Kyan, Lobsters, Nathan, Sara, Tath Seti, The Fitzwilliams, The Oros
Elliwiny: There’s a lot of outlines of people in these meeting scenes, and I vaguely remember that it’s because I got overwhelmed by the scope and Sin suggested I go about it that way. Looking back, there really isn’t anything[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.25
Elliwiny: I don’t know what to call this panel layout, where there are things going on at the same time in different places and the panels are staggered to visually separate them, but it’s become one of my favorite layouts.
Sincerely: Luckcat is a slur, Nate. I can’t remember what Vigi’s species is actually called off the top of my head. Maybe Elli will look it up for you. Elliwiny: I’m not looking it up, but I’m pretty sure it’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.9
on March 31, 2023
at 4:00 am
Chapter: Ch.3 - Follow
Characters: Collin Parish, Dr Irving Stone, Jack Frost, Kyan, Lobsters, Nathan, Sara, The Fitzwilliams, The Oros
Elliwiny: I learned SO much about commercial kitchen spaces while doing these two pages. Sin worked at a restaurant at the time and had all the good notes. Sincerely: Kitchens! How convenient that with the bankers and the aliens using[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I forgot about Seti’s little fingercap jewelry! That’s fun, past me. Sincerely: This exposition was much better than the chapter 1 exposition. I broke it up a lot more effectively and also it’s in chapter 3 so we’ve had[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I kinda wish I’d drawn Tath Seti on the interior of the bus, even though past me would have haaated it and it doesn’t really add anything to this transition. I just think the visual of Tath Seti’s posse[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…