Sincerely: The first version of this page was, uh, not good. I made Elli redo it entirely after we finished the book and now it looks amazing. Elliwiny: I don’t think I even have the old version anymore, that’s how[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: This chapter is a bit of an odd duck. I like that we get to zero in on how Kyan’s detective work is different from Vigi’s. She’s antisocial but she’s a people-watcher, too. Vigi is very active in her[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I bet the only pictures Marco’s seen are blurry way-zoomed-in news pictures taken from the spaceport on the moon or something. I’d want to tour the shipping yard, too
Sincerely: Rex kinda laying it on thick. I vaguely recall some issues with speech bubbles because how wordy he is in this scene.
Elliwiny: Aw, I like how willing to dive into new experiences Marco is.
Elliwiny: There’s no way Kyan and Rex can afford anything in this weird little gift shop slash mall boutique. Those Krispy K’s are probably like $3.
Elliwiny: Can’t believe Jack’s stupid microaggressions are a plot point. Also, Kyan’s general rudeness is really funny to me. Done with this conversation? Just leave!
Elliwiny: I was sitting here anguishing because I didn’t remember why this page takes so much time but then it hit me. That’s Jack gardening in the background! I might have to do this one better if I ever do[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sincerely: I dunno why I went so hard with the lighting in the last panel but I like it. Elliwiny: You probably did that because otherwise it’d be a void, lol
Sincerely: Oh good, I was worried that the bongs being used to prop up the console screen didn’t make it onto the page. Bugbears can’t get stoned, so I’m not sure why they have them, but they do and they[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…