Elliwiny: Heheh, it’s funny because Ben’s dead
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Elliwiny: We establish later that Atticus was supposed to send the memo that Colin is confused, but anybody can send an email, Sarah!
Elliwiny: Knowing where everything is, and where everything is within that space, is SO important to Opportunities. Especially because we don’t really do ‘cuts’ between characters – when we swap POV we usually have a visual hand-off as well, with[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.4 – Cover
Sincerely: We’re back! Sorry for the break it was because of *~depression~* but we’re back at least for chapter 4. I reread some of the later stuff recently and was reminded that I really, really, really love Opportunities. Even if[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.27
Sincerely: Villains aren’t allowed to have apple products. Please don’t tell apple that we gave several of our villains apple phones.
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.26
on May 10, 2023
at 4:00 am
Chapter: Ch.3 - Follow
Characters: Dr Irving Stone, Elet Lorn, Kyan, Lobsters, Nathan, Sara, Tath Seti, The Fitzwilliams, The Oros
Elliwiny: There’s a lot of outlines of people in these meeting scenes, and I vaguely remember that it’s because I got overwhelmed by the scope and Sin suggested I go about it that way. Looking back, there really isn’t anything[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.25
Elliwiny: I don’t know what to call this panel layout, where there are things going on at the same time in different places and the panels are staggered to visually separate them, but it’s become one of my favorite layouts.
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.24
Elliwiny: I said before that the smart thing to do would be to shoot a text to your co-conspirators warning them about the calls, but then again…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.9
on March 31, 2023
at 4:00 am
Chapter: Ch.3 - Follow
Characters: Collin Parish, Dr Irving Stone, Jack Frost, Kyan, Lobsters, Nathan, Sara, The Fitzwilliams, The Oros
Elliwiny: I learned SO much about commercial kitchen spaces while doing these two pages. Sin worked at a restaurant at the time and had all the good notes. Sincerely: Kitchens! How convenient that with the bankers and the aliens using[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.8
Elliwiny: I really love Dr. Stone’s understated entrance into the story as just another one of these banker types.