Book 1 – Ch.3 – Pg.6
Elliwiny: Hahahahaha Fitzwilliam talking about the flu or somesuch like it’s a novel inconvenience sure does hit different here in 2023
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Elliwiny: Now we’re getting into the first time Vigi’s feeling over her head. It won’t be the last time, that’s for sure.
Sincerely: If you missed it, Sarah poisoned this poor random person back on page 21, so Jack chucking himself at that poor nurse really wasn’t the worst thing happening on that page.
Elliwiny: Sarah might not be as good on the spot but she gets the job done. And now that I’m looking at this again it really is amazing how a little desk clutter and a few props go such a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I can’t even imagine what this poor assistant is going to be telling her boss later. What a weird day this must be for her.
Elliwiny: A peek into the master plan! Who could have mixed up those forms?? 😛
Elliwiny: Not cool, Jack! Don’t throw yourself at people! This sequence was such a hardcore crash course for me making sure you know the layout of the hotel well enough to follow the action. Sin made a crack about the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: These next few pages are the ones I did the most re-working on. Probably the most notable update was that alcove behind her desk, and all of the extra props on and around her desk, too. In the original,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I’m not sure the hand tremor really conveys exactly what I was going for here. He’s nervous, but it’s not really about the plan or about Sara potentially being made, that shit he can handle. It’s more about what’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Jack has this verbal tic that hints at his internal struggles that we sort of touch on in this scene, and I think we were originally going to like, get into it or make it worse on one of[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…