Book 1 – Ch.2 – Pg.21
Elliwiny: Not cool, Jack! Don’t throw yourself at people!
This sequence was such a hardcore crash course for me making sure you know the layout of the hotel well enough to follow the action. Sin made a crack about the mural a few pages ago but she was absolutely right about it’s purpose, haha.
Jack, guess you are just selling it for the poor nurse. But did you have to continue abusing the innocent bell, as well as dragging the cup of pencils into your dastardly schemes?
I love how huge and open the hotel is, beyod what you guys are bringing up in the notes about trying to make it easy to follow the action, i think that being able to have these big openn panels with lots of people also really invites the reader to look at where the characters are. really good effect. this is suuuuuch a hotel