Book 1 – Ch.4 – Pg.9
Elliwiny: I remember this one being really challenging to lay out. We’re switching POV to Vigi, who’s got to connect Sara to her newly –stolen– obtained keycards, and subtly get an assist from her luck power to dodge Jack. And then it’s gotta end on Jack’s POV! Okay, now I’m just explaining the whole thing, stop that, Elli. My point is, sometimes I’m still surprised at how much space/time these seemingly simple interactions need. I’m proud of early comics Elli for pushing through and puzzling this one out.
Sincerely: I’m not sure how clear the action on this page turned out, but it looks really pretty, so it’s fine
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