Elliwiny: These next few pages are the ones I did the most re-working on. Probably the most notable update was that alcove behind her desk, and all of the extra props on and around her desk, too. In the original,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: In the end, I don’t think it’s super important whether I successfully did the visual gymnastics needed to convey what I was going for in Jack’s head in the pep talk to Sara. I was just starting comics, and[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: I’m not sure the hand tremor really conveys exactly what I was going for here. He’s nervous, but it’s not really about the plan or about Sara potentially being made, that shit he can handle. It’s more about what’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Jack has this verbal tic that hints at his internal struggles that we sort of touch on in this scene, and I think we were originally going to like, get into it or make it worse on one of[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: This one is my favorite of Jack’s shirts, I think. Starting off the week strong. I’m also laughing at my past self for insisting I spend hours rendering the planters in this comic, hahaha Sincerely: One of the other[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sincerely: I dunno how well this reads. Storytelling via little props is always hard. You just have to hope people notice that Ben’s phone is a flip phone with music notes for a ringtone and Sara’s phone is a slab[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: So the first draft of Sara was pretty flat, mostly defined by being Jack’s Ex and kind of a nag, the functional glue that barely holds the team together. Which is redundant when we meet the real mastermind, the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Elliwiny: Vigi, please, don’t spook the suspected murderers!
Elliwiny: Vigi holding phones weird is one of my favorite little details
Sincerely: I love/hate that chandelier so much Elliwiny: I also love/hate that chandelier so much, but the planters on the edge of the restaurant get the award for biggest unnecessary time sink.