Elliwiny: Sara’s face is the biggest reason I went back and revisited these early pages in chapters 1 and 2. I just sort of settled into a design I liked better as I drew her more and more! And her helmet hair bangs could charitably be described as unfortunate.

I liked that I was stretching my artistic legs with the perspective, but look at how I stretched Jack’s legs in panel 2! Hahahaha I love it.